Unconditional Love 1 – Five Sentence Fiction
Read it till the end and comment your opinion.
It’s an ordinary story whose climax shouldn’t be ordinary one. In almost every love story parents be the one to prove their son/daughter’s choice wrong and chooses a new partner for them matching Kundli. They believe that Kundli should match not the hearts. I believe it’s orthodox.
Here is my Five Sentence Fiction. Please read and leave your opinions.
It was friendship which turned into unconditional love which had everything love, romance, emotions, togetherness, pampering, innocent fights and then everything back to normal.
The boy as lover was not acceptable to her parents as he was from different state & culture and they started creating a gap between the two and took her away from the boy.
Lots of misunderstanding happened for almost a year, but the feeling of love was still rigid which made the girl to meet the boy after a year and they promised to stay together forever looking into each other’s eyes.
As parents knew that love has won again, they themselves started creating problems to the girl and gave the boy a title of Evil Boy and influenced their daughter that he is the reason for all your tears.
The girl yelled at the guy and blamed him of something which he is not even aware of and shut all the doors for the boy.
The story is incomplete. What should be the happy ending for this? Or What could happen next?
What shall the boy do?
- Shall he feel it the end of the story and move to a new life to avoid being part of her parent’s next game?
- Shall he wait for the girl to come back?
- Shall he come forward to sort out all misunderstanding again?
Shall the love put its knees down in front of the clever parents? Or Shall he fight even after knowing that the girl will never stand by his side?
Expecting a great public opinion to help me to write the next part of the fiction. Keep yourself in place of the boy and write what would you do in this situation?